A super presentation; I love the way you've used the sinister black and red colour scheme and you've focused on relevant and pertinent details. Well done. Target: again, 'contrasting with...' and it would be helpful to refer to a 'stereotypical' murderer rather than an average murderer since you'd be incorporating media terminology.
A super presentation; I love the way you've used the sinister black and red colour scheme and you've focused on relevant and pertinent details. Well done.
ReplyDeleteTarget: again, 'contrasting with...' and it would be helpful to refer to a 'stereotypical' murderer rather than an average murderer since you'd be incorporating media terminology.